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Response: Pain Challenge - Battlestar Galactica Drabbles

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Previous Entry Response: Pain Challenge Jul. 7th, 2005 @ 07:00 am Next Entry
Title: Contradiction
Author: treefalls
Rating: PG, I guess?
No Pairing
Spoilers through KLG II

She reaches for her sidearm. (Oh, gods, what's going on...)

"Kill him. He dies now."

He reaches for her hand, to offer thanks.

She fires. (No, what... why is there blood?)

“He has to die.”

She fires again. (Don't do this, don't do this, don't.)

"Kill him now."

She drops the gun.

She tried to kill him; she tried to miss. Her mind, her (do I have a soul?) can't process the contradiction. She reaches for the gun, she wants to end her pain. (No, *they* want that.)

A strike from the left. She's on the ground; she doesn't fight.
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Date:April 29th, 2006 02:33 pm (UTC)
Yes! Wonderful. Very good gap filler. :)
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Date:May 1st, 2006 10:36 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I just wondered what that moment must've been like for poor, doomed Sharon.

(It's always fun getting feedback on something from a while ago - like it's still alive and kicking!)
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